LO4:Drafts

This is the first draft for the film trailer. There are several things that will be changed for the second draft for the trailer. Mainly the aspect ratio, as it changes halfway through the draft and the rest of the trailer is left with a black border. Some of these clips are bad due to the way they were shot and the acting in them, these will need to be re-shot. The opening shot will need to be re-shot with better lighting as it is difficult to see what is actually happening in the shot.





This draft was a little better, we experimented with jumpcuts a little which I think worked well particularly at 0:23.  Some clips don't make any sense and so need to be removed and the final shot is too long and has no worth, so that also needs to edited or removed.




In this draft we began to edit the colour to give the trailer a more dramatic feel, the beginning of this draft will most likely be included in the final version.
A lot of other clips from this draft will also be included in the final version but need their colours enhancing and a better use of transitions needs to be included. The main error in this draft, I think, is that the cameraman's reflection can be seen in the tram at 1:15 so this clip needs to be removed and re-shot.




This draft is very close to being the final version of the film trailer.
The clips all run much smoother beside each other in this version and the colour remains consistent throughout the entire trailer.

The audio does still need editing so that it can be heard better and other logos, such as the Warp Studios logo, needs to be included. The ending and title card also go on much too long, so that also needs editing.